02 November, 2011

Narrative writing

For our mini lesson in writing we looked at how to use speech marks correctly. We think Sefa came up with the best sentence. What do you think?
Sefa's sentence was:
The curious baby cried "Mummy help me!"
Posted by NF at Wednesday, November 02, 2011
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12 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 2, 2011 at 8:38 AM

    i think Sefa's sentence was the best cause he used a exiting word that discibed the baby

    By Joshua

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  2. A.J.November 2, 2011 at 11:26 AM

    WOW Sefa cool sentines you have awsome agiktives.

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  3. ryanNovember 2, 2011 at 11:27 AM

    sefa sentanc was great it had all of the things that you need for taking in your book

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  4. AnonymousNovember 2, 2011 at 11:31 AM

    Sefa used a really good ajective CURIOS.Oursome work sefa
    by Hamish

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  5. AnonymousNovember 2, 2011 at 11:33 AM

    What i liked about my writing i put speach-marks,puntuation-marks and adictives thats the best writing i've done at this school on the white-board

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  6. AnonymousNovember 2, 2011 at 11:37 AM

    Nice sentence sefa good speech marks it's good that your sentence is on the blog because you said the curious baby but i like the other people's one too good job everybody uncluding
    sefa good job


    kelle

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  7. AnonymousNovember 2, 2011 at 11:40 AM

    What i liked about my writing is that i put puntuation-marks,speach-marks and adictives it is the best writing that i've done on the white-board at this school Sefa

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  8. JacintaNovember 2, 2011 at 11:41 AM

    I think that sefa has really yoused his brain to use the ending first and talkingn last.

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  9. Ashlee bensemanNovember 2, 2011 at 11:45 AM

    Good senterns sefa It was so amasing.By Ashlee

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  10. MonicaNovember 2, 2011 at 11:53 AM

    I really like your sentinis becease you said curious

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  11. AnonymousNovember 2, 2011 at 11:53 AM

    i think sefa's one is awsome because he used the word curious and he was the only one who used the talking last.i also think sefa was really thinking and liserning about what Mrs Filipoo was saying and talking about.i also think sefa should get 7 cought in the acts for doing so well in the really awsome activeadie and Mrs Filipoo really likes it and loves it

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  12. zaydNovember 9, 2011 at 8:11 PM

    I think sefa will get 25 cought in the acts for doing so well.

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